Identity plot-
-make simpler narrative
-too many character
-maybe no woman
-ghost is the internet
-maybe not a seducing woman but a "you won a million dollars" pop-up
-refer to Allstate ---> ID Theft
- active role not passive role
-no slot machine: confusing
-piling too much in one animation
Friend isn't needed
-take it out of the computer
-the virtual world of internet becomes the real world
Friend and Family plot-
-maybe not a dog
-too vague
-plot where the family is in some sort of visible problem: "not being there for them"
Etc.
-do this or do that
-shallow or solve the problem
-what causes us to forget this essentials??
-encourage the audience not to do something or to do something
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