Sunday, December 11, 2011
Saturday, December 10, 2011
Feedbacks from last class- storyboards + character
Family & Friends Storyboard-
-Don't have Mon have his fingers plunged into his ears but have him walk away with earphones
-Show the sun rising from an outside view of the house
-Make the brother and the dog separate
Environment Storyboard-
-The events occurring take too much time
-Hyperbolize it and various scenes of dumping trash
-More apparent cause and effect plot is needed
-Don't cut to Mon's face to much (too much unnecessary repetition)
IDEAS
-Mon throws things pulled out from his pocket and have various scenes of things being flown into the mid air... The scale of these item get larger (ex.: from paper to a TV). So we don't really know where these junks end up but for sure he isn't disposing them in the right way.
Mon comes home and the things he threw away fall from the sky.
Character-
-Consistant style: the leg and the arms need to match in style
-Big mouth
-Make the eyelids become a blend to the face
-No nose
-Eyes are too far apart
-Needs shoulders
-Don't have Mon have his fingers plunged into his ears but have him walk away with earphones
-Show the sun rising from an outside view of the house
-Make the brother and the dog separate
Environment Storyboard-
-The events occurring take too much time
-Hyperbolize it and various scenes of dumping trash
-More apparent cause and effect plot is needed
-Don't cut to Mon's face to much (too much unnecessary repetition)
IDEAS
-Mon throws things pulled out from his pocket and have various scenes of things being flown into the mid air... The scale of these item get larger (ex.: from paper to a TV). So we don't really know where these junks end up but for sure he isn't disposing them in the right way.
Mon comes home and the things he threw away fall from the sky.
Character-
-Consistant style: the leg and the arms need to match in style
-Big mouth
-Make the eyelids become a blend to the face
-No nose
-Eyes are too far apart
-Needs shoulders
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