-Make it a brand new day
-Let the audience know that he works at a market first
-Take the setting out of the house
Ideas:
-Mon wears a uniform
-The family shuts the door on him
-Mon finds a certificate in a pile of letters on his bed instead of the dog giving it to him (bc if the dog gives him a good news he wants feedback- he would not be just ignoring and sleeping when Mon happily waves the letter)
-A scene of Mon leaving the market
-Mon ignores one person a day
On the Environment storyboards:
-Don't repeat Mon's "careless face scene" after each trash dumping scene
-Multiple shots of Mon dumping and missing the bins
-Make larger scale trash
On the character developments:
-Too heavy, too scary
-Flat graphics; no drop shadows; simpler
-Make him look more adorable by making his forehead larger, eyes apart and such..
-Needs to become approachable and more clueless
References- Doraemon and the Sloth from The Ice Age
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